Thursday 24 May 2012

Read our Awesome Writing

THE MAGIC BOX
I WILL PUT IN THE BOX…
THE ROAR OF A HUNGRY LION IN A JUNGLE NINE MILES AWAY
THE CRASH OF A TREE FALLING TO THE GROUND DURING A THUNDERING ROCKFALL
THE ECHO OF WAVES ROLLING ONTO A SILENT GOLDEN BEACH

I WILL PUT IN THE BOX…
THE FRESH SMELL OF SPRING AS I WALK OUTSIDE FIRST THING IN THE MORNING
THE WHIFF OF A FRESHLY CUT PEACH
THE AROMA OF OPENING A BRAND NEW BOOK

I WILL PUT IN THE BOX…
A DOG WALKING IN THIN AIR
A FIRE MADE OF ICE IN THE MIDDLE OF A SLOW FLOWING RIVER
A SCHOOL SKY DIVING TOWARDS ‘HIDDEN LAKE’

I WILL PUT IN THE BOX…
A WORLD MADE OF CHOCOLATE
A DOG WALKING A PERSON TO THE ZOO
1000 MICE IN ONE SMALL MOUSE HOUSE

MY BOX IS FASHIONED FROM DIAMONDS, GOLD AND SILVER IN THE SHAPE OF A DRAGON. ITS HINGES ARE MADE FROM ANCIENT SNAIL’S TOES. THERE IS ONE MAGIC KEY, AND ONLY ONE!

I WILL TRAVEL IN MY BOX OVER FIELDS OF FIERY RED POPPIES AND END UP IN THE SNOWY MOUNTAINS OF NORTHERN CANADA

By Liam




Will

 I am a good friend and love to play
I wonder about space and if aliens really exist
I hear the giant stomping as he passes the buildings
I see space as it comes closer and closer
I want a helicopter to fly over the mountains and valleys
I am a good friend and love to play

 I pretend to be on stage singing to my friends
I feel the dragon’s skin as it lifts me off the ground up into the clouds
I touch magic berries in an enchanted forest
I worry about a comet hitting the earth in one second
I cry when someone laughs at me just because I have something different
I am a good friend and love to play

 I understand why mum gets cross at me when I’m naughty
I say people who are good will have a really happy life
I dream of living in a world of magic where wishes come true
I try to win 1st place in a race
I hope to take a trip around the world especially to see my cousin in England
I am a good friend and love to play

By Will 





2 comments:

  1. What great writing guys. It has such great imagery in it and really creates a picture in my mind. Well done. Keep putting your work out there for all to see.

    Kerry

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  2. Whoa! Great peotry guys. You should look at getting them into a book! You have all used some very powerful words to paint a picture. How clever are you!!! Keep up the great writing everyone. Laetitia

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